You helped me write one of the most important essays of my life, and what you did for me was really a great job. I was stuck with many ideas and when we work together, we easily figured out the best idea. Together, we make so many drafts, rewrite, revise, again and again. Finally, I complete my admission essay, I couldn’t have been more proud of that. You pointed out the strength and weakness of my essay, but you also help me to write such an impressive CV. I am always proud of that essay and store it carefully as a reminder of great achievement of my high school year, and everyone who’s read my CV admits that it’s awesome. It was the essay and the CV, two important things that helped me to get big scholarship from my school (Augustana College). Thanks to you, now I am studying in America.